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Cathecassa's band moved closer to the land of Storm to protect the pregnant Whiskey from the stallion who was hounding her. As they moved closer and Starstruck went into heat. Usually she avoided going outside the band but she envied Whiskey's growing belly and she was much wiser now. What happened with Starfire's sire would not repeat.

The clouds up ahead were gathering and it began to lightly rain. Starstruck kept at an even canter and the rain stopped after a few moments. She smelled a stallion ahead. He was as gray as the the rumbling clouds above them. He greeted the mare happily introducing himself. They walked for a while. Starstruck looked up and figured the light rain would grow heavier soon. In good will she began to groom Storm's flank and side. He nickered pleasantly and returned the kind gesture. Starstruck studied his behavior and movement then made her decision that this stranger would sire her next foal but then she'd return to her band.

Storm (c) :iconleadmare1234321:
Starstruck (c) :iconvemarielimbelinde:

for another breeding we did between them

Critiques


:iconleadmare1234321:
Wow! Very good! And you have perfect anatomy! Just a few lil things I need to point out so you can improve!

Fisrt off - Storms back hind legs are a bit far out (meaning the ankle) I would make them a bit closer next time.

Another thing - the grass. It looks good, but (I dont know what program you use) I would start at the top and go down so that it covers the bottom part of the blade. Confusing....?


But all and all great job! I think the only other thing I can suggest is just making the shading a tiny bit darker. But otherwise, its perfect!!!

Hope I wasnt to harsh
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:iconleadmare1234321:
Awww! Very cute hon! And Storm looks so amazing here! Great job!

Who would you like to design the foal?

(I think I am in love with you and your art, so I watched you! If you would like, you can do a third breeding!)

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=o Very beautiful horses! I love storm's design, very sexy as is Starstrucks ;D A VERY pretty picture indeed. Very nice antonamy.

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I really like the black and white one!

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